Reply To: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Reply To: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.

February 3, 2020 at 11:02 pm

Score: 56.1

Issues:

  1. More than 20% of sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts;
  2. Nearly 40% of sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

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