Reply To: Some people believe that it is better for students to obey the rule, while others don’t. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that it is better for students to obey the rule, while others don’t. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Reply To: Some people believe that it is better for students to obey the rule, while others don’t. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

February 4, 2020 at 2:39 am

Score: 56.2

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.