Reply To: In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on the society?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on the society? Reply To: In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on the society?

February 4, 2020 at 3:10 am

Score: 51.6

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts.

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