Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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February 4, 2020 at 2:31 pm

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have disagreements (simplify to ‘disagree’) on whether they should accept or try to (unnecessary) improve bad situations. Although it is safer to adapt to terrible circumstances, the better way I think  (reorder) is trying (verb tense error) to improve them.

On the one hand, it is a safe way to get through bad situations by trying to adapt to them (rephrase sentence, subject should be ‘adapting to bad situations”). For example, people may change their occupations when their managers are bossy or (missing possessive pronoun) work is tedious. However, they can gain valuable experience from their arranged tasks, such as how to (unnecessary, delete) cooperate (cooperating) with colleagues. Besides, a new working environment often has unexpected problems. Therefore, it is safer (for people) to stick to their current jobs, because people have somehow already adapted to them (be more specific).

On the other hand, making efforts (an effort) to improve bad situations is a great choice. People usually feel stressed out and depressed when they are in trouble. Such negative emotions can do great harm to their relationships as people become less patient to their friends or families when they are under pressure (combine two previous sentences). So the best way (choose different word) for them (unnecessary) is to get rid of bad situations as soon as possible. Moreover, troubles can sometimes become unsolvable as time passes (too vague, be more specific). For example, if couples keep arguing with each other without improving their relationships, they may break up at last (unnecessary).

In my opinion, it’s (write out conjunction “it is”) better to improve bad situations rather than do nothing, because they (specify what they is) may become worth as time passes. Plus (add comma) they (specify what they is) are harmful for people’s health and relationships. Besides, people can avoid terrible results if they think prudently or ask colleagues for advice before job-hopping.