Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

February 5, 2020 at 5:13 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words;
  2. Nearly 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them;
  3. Nearly 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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