Reply To: Do you prefer to be in a small class or a large class?

February 5, 2020 at 5:34 pm

Score: 69.1

Issues:

  1. More than 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them;
  2. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.