Reply To: Which is more efficient, working alone on projects or work as a group?

February 5, 2020 at 10:25 pm

Score: 47.8

Issues:

  1. Nearly 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Although you have fixed many grammatical errors, your essay is very difficult to read. Try to do this: draw a picture of each sentence. If you are able to draw a clear picture based on the information provided in your each sentence, then the sentence is fine. If not, try to add/remove words to make your picture(s) clear.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.