Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

February 6, 2020 at 11:15 pm

Score: 62.2

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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