Reply To: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Reply To: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.

February 12, 2020 at 11:04 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Nearly 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts.

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