Reply To: In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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February 13, 2020 at 5:22 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Nearly 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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