Reply To: Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.

February 13, 2020 at 5:39 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Nearly 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.
  3. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.

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