Reply To: Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion? Reply To: Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

February 13, 2020 at 8:50 pm

Score: 46.9

Issues:

  1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Nearly 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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