Reply To: Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

February 13, 2020 at 11:05 pm

Score: 44.5

Issues:

  1. More than 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Nearly 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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