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February 14, 2020 at 5:02 am

Score: 50.4

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Nearly 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.