Reply To: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Reply To: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

February 14, 2020 at 8:36 pm

Score: 57.4

Issues:

  1. More than 80% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Nearly 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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