Reply To: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Reply To: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

February 14, 2020 at 8:52 pm

Score: 66.3

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Nearly 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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