Reply To: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Reply To: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

February 14, 2020 at 10:21 pm

Score: 55.2

Issues:

  1. More than 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

For the sake of time, I am unable to work on two or more essays at the same time for one student. Rewrite and resubmit this essay once you complete the revision of the prior one.