Reply To: TOEFL TPO 36: The lecture raised 3 pieces of criticism toward the passage About Cloud seeding, which is a way to turn harmful hails into beneficial rain or snow.

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February 17, 2020 at 1:40 pm

Score: 55.1

Issues:

  1. More than 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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