Reply To: Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Reply To: Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

February 17, 2020 at 1:51 pm

Score: 73.6

Issues:

  1. Nearly 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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