Reply To: The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Reply To: The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.

February 17, 2020 at 8:50 pm

Score: 72.9

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  1. Nearly 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

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