Reply To: In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

February 17, 2020 at 9:47 pm

Score: 74.9

Issues:

  1. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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