Reply To: Some people think too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people think too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Some people think too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

February 18, 2020 at 8:26 pm

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Issues:

  1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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