Reply To: The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette. Reply To: The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.

February 19, 2020 at 8:15 pm

Score: 61.7

Issues:

  1. Nearly 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Nearly 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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