Reply To: Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and should be encouraged to watch at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and should be encouraged to watch at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and should be encouraged to watch at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

February 20, 2020 at 2:27 am

Score: 64.8

Issues:

  1. Nearly 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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