Reply To: Some people believe that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, think that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, think that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinions. Reply To: Some people believe that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, think that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

February 20, 2020 at 4:50 pm

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  1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

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