Reply To: Nowadays it is not important for people to have regularly family meals together.

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February 20, 2020 at 10:14 pm

Score: 44.2

Issues:

  1. More than 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. The optimal length of a TOEFL essay is 280-320 words. Shorten your essay to 320 words.

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