Reply To: Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. 

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.  Reply To: Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. 

February 20, 2020 at 10:38 pm

Score: 49.4

Issues:

  1. Nearly 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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