Reply To: Scientists believe that finding other life forms in space by sending messages is a good idea while others think it can be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Scientists believe that finding other life forms in space by sending messages is a good idea while others think it can be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Reply To: Scientists believe that finding other life forms in space by sending messages is a good idea while others think it can be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

February 22, 2020 at 3:44 am

Score: 50.8

Issues:

  1. More than 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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