Reply To: It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

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February 24, 2020 at 9:40 pm

Score: 58

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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