Reply To: Many schoolchildren and students are taught to push themselves and try hard to be better than their classmates, rather than work for everyone’s benefits. Do you think this disadvantage of being trained to be competitive outweigh advantages?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many schoolchildren and students are taught to push themselves and try hard to be better than their classmates, rather than work for everyone’s benefits. Do you think this disadvantage of being trained to be competitive outweigh advantages? Reply To: Many schoolchildren and students are taught to push themselves and try hard to be better than their classmates, rather than work for everyone’s benefits. Do you think this disadvantage of being trained to be competitive outweigh advantages?

March 2, 2020 at 3:05 am

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  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

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