Reply To: In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in others, government pays or them. Do you think the advantages of government paying the money outweigh the disadvantages?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in others, government pays or them. Do you think the advantages of government paying the money outweigh the disadvantages? Reply To: In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in others, government pays or them. Do you think the advantages of government paying the money outweigh the disadvantages?

March 2, 2020 at 3:14 am

Score: 50.7

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  1. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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