Reply To: Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs(for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs(for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs(for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

March 4, 2020 at 3:46 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. One paragraph is too long. Restrict each paragraph within 85 words.
  2. About 25% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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