Reply To: In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Reply To: In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

March 4, 2020 at 5:08 pm

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  1. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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