Reply To: The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Reply To: The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

March 4, 2020 at 6:59 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Nearly 70% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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