Reply To: It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.

March 6, 2020 at 10:00 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40 of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.