Reply To: Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.

March 6, 2020 at 10:46 pm

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Issues:

  1. One paragraph contains more than 150 words. Keep each paragraph within 90 words.
  2. Several consecutive sentences start with the same word.
  3. More than 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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