Reply To: The following appeared on the Website Science News Today. “In a recent survey of more than 5,000 adolescents, the teens who reported eating the most meals with their families were the least likely to use illegal drugs, tobacco, or alcohol.

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March 7, 2020 at 2:39 am

Score: 32.1

Issues:

  1. The essay is too long. Shorten it to 400- words;
  2. Restrict each paragraph within 90 words;
  3. More than 80% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  4. Nearly 40% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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