Reply To: Some people are of the opinion that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army. Others believe that this work is unsuitable for women. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people are of the opinion that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army. Others believe that this work is unsuitable for women. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Reply To: Some people are of the opinion that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army. Others believe that this work is unsuitable for women. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

March 9, 2020 at 7:35 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 70% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.