Reply To: Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(in words, pictures, music or film)in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(in words, pictures, music or film)in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Reply To: Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(in words, pictures, music or film)in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

March 9, 2020 at 9:53 pm

Score: 48.7

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.