Reply To: The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree? Reply To: The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

March 10, 2020 at 1:40 am

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Issues:

  1. More than 70% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.

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