Reply To: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

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March 10, 2020 at 2:01 am

Score: 64.1

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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