Reply To: Kids are more influenced by their teachers than by their parents.

March 12, 2020 at 3:30 am

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I will not work on your essay before you fix A. all the dangling sentences; B. shift of person

Dangling Examples:

  1. As a human being, things that …. Things are not a human being;
  2. Compared with teachers, It… It cannot be compared with teachers;

Shift of person:

  1. your eyes might copy from your mother, your ….You used 3rd person, then you changed to the 2nd person. Remain consistent.