Reply To: Maintaining public libraries is the waste of money, since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Maintaining public libraries is the waste of money, since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Maintaining public libraries is the waste of money, since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

March 12, 2020 at 2:56 pm

Score: 47.1

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.