Reply To: Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Reply To: Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

March 16, 2020 at 12:59 am

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Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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