Reply To: Maintaining public libraries is the waste of money, since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It’s [informal writing ]an increasingly widespread concern that individuals nowadays tend to look up materials online instead of consulting the library. Many people doubt
think over the issue regarding whether the investment[word form error ] in keeping libraries is unnecessary. My view is that libraries still bring us good [ unclear]in this internet age, and we should make[article error ] effort to maintain it[unclear pronoun ].
It’s[ informal ] obvious that libraries are not as useful as they used to be. Nowadays, to look up materials, we can simply open our laptop, tapping[unparalleled ] the keywords, and then search. And [punctuation error with coordinating word ]the results always satisfy us. However, going to a library and looking for a book from tons of resources rooms is rather time-consuming. Therefore, many people prefer searching [wrong word form ]for[redundant ] what they want on the Internet, instead of going to the library. However, the library still harbor functions which the Internet don’t [ grammatical error]provide. For instance, libraries hold off-line reading meetings, reading marathons and writing contests from time to time. That’s [informal ]a fabulous way to help citizens broaden their views[wrong phrase ] from others’ sharing and enlarge their circle of friends[wordy ]. If libraries don’t exist, this kind of joy will also disappear[grammatical error with subjunctive voice ].
Moreover, libraries play a pivotal role in building local characteristics[unclear ]. For many cities, even countries, the library is not only a tool for reading or searching for references, [ punctuation error]but a symbol of the culture in this area. Books in the library also carry the wisdom of predecessors and can motivate us to move forward as well as create a brighter future. That is the implication which distinguishes libraries from computers.
To conclude, I still harbor the view [wordy ]that spending money maintaining the libraries is worthwhile. In the long term, both library and technology can benefit us a lot.