Reply To: Some school leavers tend to go traveling or work for a period of time before going to university directly. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages and what is your own opinion?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some school leavers tend to go traveling or work for a period of time before going to university directly. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages and what is your own opinion? Reply To: Some school leavers tend to go traveling or work for a period of time before going to university directly. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages and what is your own opinion?

March 20, 2020 at 3:42 pm

Score: 56.3

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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