Reply To: Instead of asking for the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay their own tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Instead of asking for the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay their own tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Instead of asking for the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay their own tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree?

March 21, 2020 at 2:22 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 100% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 75% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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