Reply To: Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

March 21, 2020 at 2:45 am

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Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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