Reply To: A longer prison term as a way of punishing those who break the law is not as good as other methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing A longer prison term as a way of punishing those who break the law is not as good as other methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: A longer prison term as a way of punishing those who break the law is not as good as other methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

March 21, 2020 at 9:59 pm

Score: 61.1

Issues:

  1. More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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