Reply To: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Reply To: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.

March 23, 2020 at 8:00 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 80% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 60% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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